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I will read your manuscript and provide constructive and developmental feedback

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Independent author of three highly rated novels and several short stories. I've been writing professionally for over 20 years and hold a degree in Journalism. Also an avid reader.
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I am an independent author with several published novels and over 20 years writing experience. I will read your book manuscript and provide you with written notes and feedback, with the aim to improve your story.

Much more than a simple readthrough, you will receive detailed thoughts and suggestions on ways you can not only improve on the story, but also any recommended adjustments to style and pacing. You will also receive suggestions on adjustments for voice (passive vs. active), use of descriptive verbs vs. adjectives, and areas where you may need to cut from or add to the story.

Think of it it as an early beta read (or alpha read), with developmental edits.

And while this is not a full proofread, I will also mark up any grammatical, spelling or other errors as I come across them.
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    christinenorvel

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    5

    Bill really helped me see my manuscript with different eyes, from grammar to characters and setting. I'm so grateful he provided letter-length creative feedback about my story arc as well as line edits. Super thorough!

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    christinenorvel

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    Easy as could be. His response email was letter-length with helpful and constructive comments. Edit marks were easy to follow.

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    roysteves

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    The result was exactly what I was looking for! The story I gave him was a sprint project, a challenge to write a short story in one day, and so it definitely needed some going over, and he delivered brilliantly.

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3 reviews van deze dienst
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Specificering van de beoordeling
  • Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
    5
  • Aanbevelingswaardig
    5
  • Dienst zoals beschreven
    5
Sorteer op
Meest relevant
  • C

    christinenorvel

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Bill really helped me see my manuscript with different eyes, from grammar to characters and setting. I'm so grateful he provided letter-length creative feedback about my story arc as well as line edits. Super thorough!

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • C

    christinenorvel

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Easy as could be. His response email was letter-length with helpful and constructive comments. Edit marks were easy to follow.

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • R
    image-docs

    roysteves

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    The result was exactly what I was looking for! The story I gave him was a sprint project, a challenge to write a short story in one day, and so it definitely needed some going over, and he delivered brilliantly.

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen