I will analyze article narrative structure and scope

I will evaluate your article, essay, report, speech, or narrative against its assignment, audience, purpose, narrative spine, and scope, then identify the most consequential repairs.

You will receive:

a structural diagnosis

a narrative-structure map

an assessment of relevance, scope, and explanatory burden

three prioritized structural interventions

a revised outline

one short handoff conversation

This is structural diagnosis, not line editing, ghostwriting, or a full rewrite. I distinguish logical coherence from editorial relevance and identify where interesting material creates unnecessary obligations for the reader.

Best for one document up to 5,000 words with one purpose and audience. Provide the assignment or brief, audience, desired outcome, and constraints. Research, certification, and unlimited revisions are excluded.

Proofreading boundary: Light proofreading applies to the report, revised outline, handoff materials, and excerpts quoted in my analysis. It corrects obvious errors in those deliverables. It does not include line-by-line proofreading or copyediting of the submitted source document. Full-document proofreading is separate and excluded from every package.