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I will read and critique your fiction manuscript
Passionate editor, published writer, book lover
Over deze dienst
I am an editor and fellow writer with a passion for fiction. I want to help you bring out the best in your stories and yourself. All my feedback will be constructive, offering potential solutions to any problems I might find. From both a writer's and a reader's perspective, I will give feedback on:
- How hooking your first chapter is
- How engaging your writing is
- How realistic your dialogue is
- How confusing your story is (if at all)
- How well the story flows
- How readable the story is
- How realistic the characters are
- How visual the world is
You will receive a document that's at least 1,000 words of pure feedback. I hope I can help you make the best out of your manuscript!
Please message me before placing an order so we can work it all out. I'm looking forward to working with you!
- Jane Barnaby
*Note: This is not an editing service. If you need proofreading or copyediting, you are free to visit my other gig.
Taal:
Engels
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Veelgestelde vragen
What if my manuscript is longer than 75,000 words?
I am still more than happy to read and critique it! Just send me a message and I will make a custom offer for you.
What genres do you read?
Any, so long as it's fiction and creative writing. I have a special place in my heart for SF/F and MG, but I love all books.
Do you also offer proofreading or copyediting services?
Yes, I do! You can find the gig on my profile.
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ennylswollef

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I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...
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heatherpaint391
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Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!
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azav11

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Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.
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I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!
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Specificering van de beoordeling
- Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
- Aanbevelingswaardig
- Dienst zoals beschreven
Sorteer op
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ennylswollef

Spanje
I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...
Nuttig?J jrmastic

Verenigde Staten
Thought the report could have been more detailed
J 
Reactie van de freelancer
Nuttig?H 
heatherpaint391
Terugkerende klant

Verenigd Koninkrijk
Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!
Nuttig?A 
azav11

Verenigde Staten
Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.
Nuttig?O outsidetheboxj

Verenigde Staten
I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!
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