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I will read and critique your fiction manuscript

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Nederland

Ik spreek Nederlands, Engels

42 bestellingen voltooid

Passionate editor, published writer, book lover

After spending years learning English grammar, spelling, and punctuation in order to make it my own, a little voice inside me always tells me to fix what is wrong. The only beings capable of holding m...
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Are you looking for a fresh set of objective eyes to look at your manuscript? Do you need feedback to find out what's working, what isn't, and how to improve your writing? Look no further.

I am an editor and fellow writer with a passion for fiction. I want to help you bring out the best in your stories and yourself. All my feedback will be constructive, offering potential solutions to any problems I might find. From both a writer's and a reader's perspective, I will give feedback on:
  • How hooking your first chapter is
  • How engaging your writing is
  • How realistic your dialogue is
  • How confusing your story is (if at all)
  • How well the story flows
  • How readable the story is
  • How realistic the characters are
  • How visual the world is

You will receive a document that's at least 1,000 words of pure feedback. I hope I can help you make the best out of your manuscript!

Please message me before placing an order so we can work it all out. I'm looking forward to working with you!
- Jane Barnaby

*Note: This is not an editing service. If you need proofreading or copyediting, you are free to visit my other gig.

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    I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...

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    Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!

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    Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.

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    I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!

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9 reviews van deze dienst
4,8

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Specificering van de beoordeling
  • Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
    5
  • Aanbevelingswaardig
    4,6
  • Dienst zoals beschreven
    4,9
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  • E
    image-docs

    ennylswollef

    ES

    Spanje

    5

    I appreciated how the seller offers two types of critique - one where she can be 100% frank and another which calls for more sensitivity. From the outset this marked Jane as a reliable reader. I chose the first option and was pleased to receive a thorough - honest and fair - critique of my work. Order...

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • J

    jrmastic

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    Verenigde Staten

    3,7

    Thought the report could have been more detailed

    J
    image-docs

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  • H
    image-docs

    heatherpaint391

    Terugkerende klant

    GB

    Verenigd Koninkrijk

    5

    Excellent service and she was able to adapt to my request!

    Nuttig?
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  • A
    image-docs

    azav11

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    4,7

    Seller delivered on time and provided a long critique.

    Nuttig?
    Ja
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    outsidetheboxj

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    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I had a fantastic experience with Jane! She had great communication, fast turn around, and was very knowledgable. She had very insightful thoughts for my draft that will definitely help me improve my story. Highly suggest! Thank you for your help!

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee