I will critique and developmentally edit your romantasy novel

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Experienced Beta Reader and Developmental Editor

Hi! I'm Kira, and I help authors turn drafts into ready-to-publish novels. With detailed and actionable beta reads and developmental edits, I have already aided 100's of writers. I specialise in YA...

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Focus on bringing your manuscript up to publishing standard with a developmental edit


If you're a real writer looking to polish your manuscript into the kind of novel publishers fight over, then I am the editor for you!


This developmental edit goes well beyond a beta read, focusing on a more in-depth analysis of your structure, pacing, character development, and reader engagement.


Your full editorial letter will include:

  • Overview
  • First Impressions
  • Storyline and Plot
  • Structure and Pacing
  • Character Development
  • Dialogue
  • Voice and Narrative Style
  • Setting and Worldbuilding
  • Suggested Action Plan



I also include in-line comments as I read through your pages. This will allow you to see which points elicit an emotional response, as well as any inconsistencies that need to be addressed.


A developmental edit is perfect for those looking to query their work or beginning their self-publishing journey.


I am experienced in the romance, fantasy, romantasy, dystopian, and sci-fi genres. Known for providing detailed, constructive feedback and trusted by over 100 authors on Fiverr.


Ready to transform your manuscript?

Contact me first to book your developmental edit.


I do not use AI.

Taal:

Engels

Genre:

Actie

Avontuur

Fanfiction

Horror/thriller

Doelgroep :

Algemene lezers

Tiener/jongvolwassene

Volwassen

POV:

Eerste persoon

Derde persoon beperkt

Niveau van complexiteit:

Eenvoudig / gemakkelijk te lezen

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    lieslgray

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    Kira reviewed the first two chapters of my fantasy novel, after I've been reworking the start point in my novel. In-line comments with reader reactions and a few suggestions were included, along with a reader report, broken down by subject (first impressions, pacing, character, dialogue, world building,...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

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    2 dagen

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    5

    Once again, Kira has blown me away. Her exceptional level of detail, kindness, and thorough knowledge is priceless. This is our second collaboration together and I’m even more thrilled than the first time, which I didn’t even believe was possible. I highly recommend her to every indie author I know....

    US$ 400-US$ 600

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    4 weken geleden

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    Ja
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    shannonsayswhat

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    5

    A great experience! I submitted my first chapter for review, and Kira provided excellent feedback on what was working and what needed more attention. The inline comments were particularly helpful, since they provided essentially "live" feedback--without the stress of watching someone read your work! I would definitely work with Kira again.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    2 dagen

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    Ja
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    xtiaan

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    5

    I'm delighted to share my experience with Kira's editing services for the second time. Kira's insights and suggestions have once again proven invaluable in refining my manuscript. Her keen eye for detail and thoughtful feedback have elevated the quality of my work significantly. Working with Kira has...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    2 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • X
    image-docs

    xtiaan

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    4,7

    Kira did a detailed development edit on my manuscript. She gave me a lot of very productive notes and a lot of homework to do. But that was great. My story will be better for it. Highly recommend Kira.

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    3 dagen

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    Ja
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  • L

    lieslgray

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Kira reviewed the first two chapters of my fantasy novel, after I've been reworking the start point in my novel. In-line comments with reader reactions and a few suggestions were included, along with a reader report, broken down by subject (first impressions, pacing, character, dialogue, world building,...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    2 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • J
    image-docs

    j_a_townsend

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Once again, Kira has blown me away. Her exceptional level of detail, kindness, and thorough knowledge is priceless. This is our second collaboration together and I’m even more thrilled than the first time, which I didn’t even believe was possible. I highly recommend her to every indie author I know....

    US$ 400-US$ 600

    Prijs

    4 weken geleden

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • S
    image-docs

    shannonsayswhat

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    A great experience! I submitted my first chapter for review, and Kira provided excellent feedback on what was working and what needed more attention. The inline comments were particularly helpful, since they provided essentially "live" feedback--without the stress of watching someone read your work! I would definitely work with Kira again.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    2 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • X
    image-docs

    xtiaan

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I'm delighted to share my experience with Kira's editing services for the second time. Kira's insights and suggestions have once again proven invaluable in refining my manuscript. Her keen eye for detail and thoughtful feedback have elevated the quality of my work significantly. Working with Kira has...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    2 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen
  • X
    image-docs

    xtiaan

    Terugkerende klant

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    4,7

    Kira did a detailed development edit on my manuscript. She gave me a lot of very productive notes and a lot of homework to do. But that was great. My story will be better for it. Highly recommend Kira.

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    3 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Geen