I will beta read your story and give extensive feedback

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4,9

Brazilië

Ik spreek Engels, Portugees, Spaans

67 bestellingen voltooid

beta reader and writing editor

I’m an avid reader and fiction enthusiast, currently majoring in psychology, which fuels my natural curiosity and taste for the peculiar.

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Over deze dienst

I offer thoughtful feedback focused on character psychology, emotional impact, relationship dynamics, pacing, tension, story logic, and the deeper architecture of your manuscript. I welcome first-time writers, indie authors, fanfiction writers, passion projects, and authors preparing to revise or publish. I'm open to rough drafts, polished manuscripts, and early-stage projects that need clearer direction.

My feedback will address:

  • Central conflicts and themes
  • Plot holes, inconsistencies, and story logic
  • Pacing, confusing or underdeveloped passages
  • Character motivation, believability, growth, and likeability
  • Romantic chemistry, intimacy, and emotional payoff
  • Relationship dynamics, dialogue, atmosphere, and engagement
  • Worldbuilding, magic systems, lore, and consistency

What to expect from my reports: My reports are in-depth and academically styled, a literary and thematic analysis that reads more like an essay than a checklist. Every point and question you submit is fully addressed, but woven into the analysis throughout the report. Expect several pages. If you're looking for short, direct, bullet-point feedback, my style likely isn't the match you need.

Genre:

Avontuur

Horror/thriller

Mysterie

Romantiek

Sciencefiction

Taal:

Engels

Portugees

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    dhallakx7

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    5

    Her work was absolutely amazing. I sent off my manuscript for book 1 of my dark fantasy story and the notes and observations she gave absolutely blew my mind. She gave so much detail and insight into aspects of the character's psyche that she noticed that I, the writer, hadn't even thought of. She also...

    US$ 100-US$ 200

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    12 dagen

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    lmmflinders

    AU

    Australië

    5

    Maisa deep dived into the Kendra Chronicles manuscript, even understanding that it was book two in the series for a cold read to assess its ability to stand alone, she produced a lengthy report. She found a few things where it could be strengthened but It also showed me the book I have is structurally...

    US$ 100-US$ 200

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    13 dagen

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    dhallakx7

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    This is the second time I have hired this AWESOME beta reader for a manuscript. Unlike others I’ve worked with, she REALLY delves i to the psychological aspects of your characters, bringing up motivations and possible inter-character conflicts and views you hadn’t even thought to consider before. She’s...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    12 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
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    natasha_tyndale

    GB

    Verenigd Koninkrijk

    5

    Maisa provided me with an extremely detailed breakdown and analysis of my manuscript, looking at the themes, plot, character, psychological aspects, effectiveness, and coherence of my story. She provided textual references to what aspects of her work she saw in other media to help me place my story....

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    3 weken geleden

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • M
    image-docs

    mike_zurfluh

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I’ve now lost count of how many times I have invested my trust into Maisa. The return on investment is tenfold! Probably more. I honestly don’t know if I’d keep my creative projects going without her! She adds so much value to them. Her instincts are spot on. She goes above and beyond every time. She...

    US$ 50

    Prijs

    10 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
    1 persoon vond deze review nuttig.
Reviews

54 reviews van deze dienst
4,9

(53)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(1)
Specificering van de beoordeling
  • Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
    4,9
  • Kwaliteit van de levering
    4,9
  • Waarde van de levering
    4,9
Sorteer op
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  • D
    image-docs

    dhallakx7

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Her work was absolutely amazing. I sent off my manuscript for book 1 of my dark fantasy story and the notes and observations she gave absolutely blew my mind. She gave so much detail and insight into aspects of the character's psyche that she noticed that I, the writer, hadn't even thought of. She also...

    US$ 100-US$ 200

    Prijs

    12 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
    1 persoon vond deze review nuttig.
  • L

    lmmflinders

    AU

    Australië

    5

    Maisa deep dived into the Kendra Chronicles manuscript, even understanding that it was book two in the series for a cold read to assess its ability to stand alone, she produced a lengthy report. She found a few things where it could be strengthened but It also showed me the book I have is structurally...

    US$ 100-US$ 200

    Prijs

    13 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
    1 persoon vond deze review nuttig.
  • D
    image-docs

    dhallakx7

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    This is the second time I have hired this AWESOME beta reader for a manuscript. Unlike others I’ve worked with, she REALLY delves i to the psychological aspects of your characters, bringing up motivations and possible inter-character conflicts and views you hadn’t even thought to consider before. She’s...

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    12 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • N

    natasha_tyndale

    GB

    Verenigd Koninkrijk

    5

    Maisa provided me with an extremely detailed breakdown and analysis of my manuscript, looking at the themes, plot, character, psychological aspects, effectiveness, and coherence of my story. She provided textual references to what aspects of her work she saw in other media to help me place my story....

    US$ 50-US$ 100

    Prijs

    3 weken geleden

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • M
    image-docs

    mike_zurfluh

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I’ve now lost count of how many times I have invested my trust into Maisa. The return on investment is tenfold! Probably more. I honestly don’t know if I’d keep my creative projects going without her! She adds so much value to them. Her instincts are spot on. She goes above and beyond every time. She...

    US$ 50

    Prijs

    10 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
    1 persoon vond deze review nuttig.