I will beta read your fantasy story
Romance Developmental Editing
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Over deze dienst
Unleash the Magic in Your Fantasy Story!
Have you written a fantasy short story, novel, or novella that feels more like first-draft chaos than an epic masterpiece? I'm here to help you refine it into the book you've always dreamed of creating!
Ill dive into your world, sword in hand (figuratively!), and provide a detailed readers report covering:
- Plot: Does your quest captivate? Are the twists truly magical?
- Character: Are your heroes unforgettable, villains chilling, and sidekicks endearing?
- Pacing: Does the story flow like an ancient river or a galloping dragon?
- Setting: Is your world immersive, magical, and alive with detail?
- Writing Style: Does your prose dazzle, transport, and enchant?
Along with actionable feedback, you'll get a fun, meme-infused document of my reactions as I journey through your story, offering insight into how readers will experience it.
What I DON'T do:
No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-editing. My focus is on big-picture feedback to help you sharpen your narrative magic.
Ready to craft the next fantasy masterpiece? Lets collaborate!
(Contact me before purchasing so we can discuss your project in detail.)
Genre:
Sciencefiction
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Fantasie
Taal:
Engels
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K krystlesi92

Verenigd Koninkrijk
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
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westerntech

Verenigde Staten
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
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3 weken geleden
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Nuttig?W whytnieshannen

Verenigde Staten
Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.
Tot maximaal US$ 50
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13 dagen
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h_parker303

Verenigde Staten
I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.
Tot maximaal US$ 50
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9 dagen
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Nuttig?B bmat2000

Verenigde Staten
Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!
Tot maximaal US$ 50
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7 dagen
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11 reviews van deze dienst
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| (1) | ||
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Specificering van de beoordeling
- Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
- Kwaliteit van de levering
- Waarde van de levering
Sorteer op
K krystlesi92

Verenigd Koninkrijk
Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again
Tot maximaal US$ 50
Prijs
2 weken geleden
Looptijd
Nuttig?W 
westerntech

Verenigde Staten
Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...
Tot maximaal US$ 50
Prijs
3 weken geleden
Looptijd
Nuttig?W whytnieshannen

Verenigde Staten
Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.
Tot maximaal US$ 50
Prijs
13 dagen
Looptijd
Nuttig?H 
h_parker303

Verenigde Staten
I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.
Tot maximaal US$ 50
Prijs
9 dagen
Looptijd
Nuttig?B bmat2000

Verenigde Staten
Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!
Tot maximaal US$ 50
Prijs
7 dagen
Looptijd
Nuttig?

