I will beta read your fantasy story

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Argentinië

Ik spreek Engels, Spaans

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Romance Developmental Editing

Hello! I'm an avid reader, writer, and beta reader with experience providing feedback and developmental edits in a wide range of genres, including fantasy, romance, YA, and fanfiction (among many othe...

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Unleash the Magic in Your Fantasy Story! 

Have you written a fantasy short story, novel, or novella that feels more like first-draft chaos than an epic masterpiece? I'm here to help you refine it into the book you've always dreamed of creating!


Ill dive into your world, sword in hand (figuratively!), and provide a detailed readers report covering:


  • Plot: Does your quest captivate? Are the twists truly magical?
  • Character: Are your heroes unforgettable, villains chilling, and sidekicks endearing?
  • Pacing: Does the story flow like an ancient river or a galloping dragon?
  • Setting: Is your world immersive, magical, and alive with detail?
  • Writing Style: Does your prose dazzle, transport, and enchant?


Along with actionable feedback, you'll get a fun, meme-infused document of my reactions as I journey through your story, offering insight into how readers will experience it.


What I DON'T do:

No line-editing, proofreading, or copy-editing. My focus is on big-picture feedback to help you sharpen your narrative magic.


Ready to craft the next fantasy masterpiece? Lets collaborate!

(Contact me before purchasing so we can discuss your project in detail.)

Genre:

Sciencefiction

Fantasie

Taal:

Engels

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    krystlesi92

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    5

    Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again

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    westerntech

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    3,3

    Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

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    3 weken geleden

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    whytnieshannen

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    5

    Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    13 dagen

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    Ja
    Nee
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    h_parker303

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

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    9 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
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    bmat2000

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    5

    Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    7 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
Reviews

11 reviews van deze dienst
4,8

(10)
(0)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Specificering van de beoordeling
  • Communicatieniveau van de freelancer
    4,8
  • Kwaliteit van de levering
    4,8
  • Waarde van de levering
    4,9
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  • K
    image-docs

    krystlesi92

    GB

    Verenigd Koninkrijk

    5

    Really good experience I liked how you can see her reading through the manscript the reactions. Some really good advice I followed would work her again

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    2 weken geleden

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • W
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    westerntech

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    3,3

    Did she give me a readers report and leave comments on my book, yes. With reviewing her reading report, she did bring up some fair points that will help me consider and improve my book. Unfortunately there was some frustrations along with order. She asked for a time extension twice, which messed with...

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    3 weken geleden

    Looptijd

    Werkvoorbeeld
    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • W
    image-docs

    whytnieshannen

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Thank you sticking with me through the edits to my draft, Millie! You’ve been fun to work with and the comments you leave in my drafts are so rewarding.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    13 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
  • H
    image-docs

    h_parker303

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    I had a great experience working with Millie. I needed a beta reader to have a look at my novel and give me honest feedback and that's exactly what I got. She pointed out both strengths and weaknesses in my story, all in a constructive way, in an easily readable report.

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    9 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee
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    bmat2000

    US

    Verenigde Staten

    5

    Very helpful feedback! The critique was good, and Millie gave me a lot to think about. Thanks so much!

    Tot maximaal US$ 50

    Prijs

    7 dagen

    Looptijd

    Nuttig?
    Ja
    Nee